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"Sol"

Scarlet, like rage, the Sun dies

Taking the leap over the West horizon

Leaving rivulets of gleaming, bloody colour

In his wake.

I stand as witness to

His luminescent suicide

I watch, and weep for wonder

Wandering through a

Labyrinthine life

He dies

I watch

I weep

I think of you.
:iconalone-and-strong:

Author's Comments

I love you so much, I'm likely to die of it.
Thanks.

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:icondolphin64575:
so beautiful! love the metaphors and personification! (<-- English nerd)

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(not-so-secretly obsessed with detail and realism)
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Gibblet :D
:iconalone-and-strong:
Thank you so much; don't worry yourself, I'm an English nerd too.

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There is the elect to whom beautiful things mean only Beauty.
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The vivid tulips eat my oxygen.
:iconvalhallasdaughter:
This is beautiful - such deep meaning, such pain in what you write though it isn't necessarily an obvious thing.

Wonderfully done :heart:

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...vampyyri...
I'm not asking for much. All I want is your soul...

~REPO-Army
~LionKingPride
~The-Labyrinth-Club
:iconhurricanecolette:
i love you wowjust wow

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But if u r ready to sail the storm,Enter the unusual and for get the norm,So put your hart on the table and place your bet And beware of the lovely hurricane Colette "
:iconufekkk007:
So perfect, so beautiful, so amazing

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"The pen is truly mighter than the sword"

*****
Sorry for English :D
:iconi-am-nothing:
Excellent.

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If something super-natural takes place, then it's rather very natural.
:iconalone-and-strong:
I love you too.
So, so much- I was by the sea recently, and the sunset just made me weep.

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There is the elect to whom beautiful things mean only Beauty.
--- :heart: --- :heart: ---
The vivid tulips eat my oxygen.
:iconalone-and-strong:
Thank you so much- your kindness means a lot.

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There is the elect to whom beautiful things mean only Beauty.
--- :heart: --- :heart: ---
The vivid tulips eat my oxygen.
:iconalone-and-strong:
Thank you so much- I am very happy you like my work.

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There is the elect to whom beautiful things mean only Beauty.
--- :heart: --- :heart: ---
The vivid tulips eat my oxygen.

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